If I could live anywhere in the world, I would live in........ because............

Original:
I would live in Taiwan, because it is where I was born and where my family is. Although some of my relatives live in other countries, they will still come back for visits. Also, the climate in Taiwan doesn't change a lot. It can be hot or cold, but it isn't really hot that you keep sweating all day long. Nor is it cold that if will snow. I am also used to living in Taiwan, like the time and cultures.

Corrected:
I would live in Taiwan, because it is where I was born and where my family is. Although some of my relatives live in other countries, they will still come back for visits. Also, the climate in Taiwan doesn't change a lot. It can be hot or cold, but it isn't really so hot that you keep sweating all day long. Nor is it so cold that if will snow. I am also used to living in Taiwan, like the time difference and cultures.