When people move into adult lives, they have to face the whole world. You will have to deal with a lot of other people, and to earn money. Sometimes you can be dealing with nice people, who will also take care of you. Other times, you may be dealing with harsh people. If you don’t do something right, they might cause problems for you, even kill you. Also, if you cannot earn enough money, you will not be able to afford things in your life, and it can cause you to become a homeless person, or even worse than that.
Oct 26, 2010
Oct 18, 2010
Helen on Eighty-Sixth Street Quickwrite
Original:
When I was younger, I always make wishes and hope to get what I wished. I have had wishes like my parents getting me something that I really wanted. But it doesn’t usually come true. Then, I know that making wishes is just dreaming and hoping to have some sort of things, and don’t usually come true. When I became older, I still make wishes, but didn’t hope as much as before for it to come true. Now I have saved up some money, so if I want to buy something, I can pay on my own. But sometimes when buying things that I know my parents will not want me to buy or to own those things, I wished that they will not discover that I bought those things. And this kind of wishes comes true quite a few times. I know that I have been wanting for more things when I already have quite a lot, and sometimes I use only once the thing I bought. So I don’t wish as much now.
Oct 13, 2010
How would you live your life if you will die at age 20?
Original:
If I know that I will die at age 20, I will live my life the way I want to live it. I would like to travel around the world to places that I want to go, meet a lot of new people, make friends and have good memories. Also, I would want to buy everything that I want, not hearing what other people say and not bother to look at the cost.
Oct 5, 2010
The Most Memorable Character
Original:
Most memorable character: Count Olaf
Most outstanding character trait: He is a villain who aimed for something, and tried his very best to get what he wanted.
Character appearance: He is kind of old and creepy. Also, his way of wearing his clothes aren't really liked by the 3 orphans. He has an eye tattoo on one of his ankle. A lot of times in the story, he pretend to be someone else by dressing up. It could fool other people easily, but never the 3 orphans.
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Most memorable character: Count Olaf
Most outstanding character trait: He is a villain who aimed for something, and tried his very best to get what he wanted.
Character appearance: He is kind of old and creepy. Also, his way of wearing his clothes aren't really liked by the 3 orphans. He has an eye tattoo on one of his ankle. A lot of times in the story, he pretend to be someone else by dressing up. It could fool other people easily, but never the 3 orphans.
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Oct 2, 2010
Crime on Mars – Vocabularies
Original:
That guy was famous in an instant because he found a really famous work’s replica, the original is still not found. People only had a slight idea what the art work is about since it was from the aboriginal days. The art work is too mystery that it is kind of incredible. No one truly understands the enigma hidden in the art work. Therefore, many inquisitive people are trying to find out more about the art work.
Corrected:
That guy was famous in an instant because he found a replica of a really famous work of art, the original is still not found. People only had a slight idea what the art work is about since it is an aboriginal art. The art work is quite incredible. No one truly understands the enigma hidden in the art work. Therefore, many inquisitive people are trying to find out more about the art work.
That guy was famous in an instant because he found a really famous work’s replica, the original is still not found. People only had a slight idea what the art work is about since it was from the aboriginal days. The art work is too mystery that it is kind of incredible. No one truly understands the enigma hidden in the art work. Therefore, many inquisitive people are trying to find out more about the art work.
Corrected:
That guy was famous in an instant because he found a replica of a really famous work of art, the original is still not found. People only had a slight idea what the art work is about since it is an aboriginal art. The art work is quite incredible. No one truly understands the enigma hidden in the art work. Therefore, many inquisitive people are trying to find out more about the art work.
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