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I think the pressure is from outside forces. When people are born, everyone is different, even just a little bit. Being the same may make same people happy because they can't do things some others can. So being the same will mean they don't have to try or do things to make other people like them more. Although, people that are better than others, might not want to be the same.
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I think the pressure is from outside forces. When people are born, everyone is different, even just a little bit. Being the same may make same people happy because they can't do things some others can. So being the same will mean they don't have to try or do things to make other people like them more. Although, people that are better than others, might not want to be the same. They may prefer acting on their own, and since they are better them other people, they are not afraid what the others think of them. Also, the 'better' people are better than others, some they worked hard, so it's not worth it to become the same as the others.
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