Nov 3, 2010

A Christmas Memory QuickWrite

Original:
Friendship can last if you are truly the best friend, while sometimes, if a friend doesn't trust you, the friendship might be broken within a day.
Best friends
- love you
- trust you
- give you supports
- help you
- give you ideas
- treasure you
- understand each others
When you have fights a friend that is you best friend, you won't want to lose her/him, and s/he won't want to lose you. so one of you will try to make up while the other forgive.

Corrected:

Friendship can last if you are truly the best friend, while sometimes, if a friend doesn't trust you, the friendship might be broken within a day. 
Best friends love you, trust you, give you support, help you, give you ideas, treasure you, understand each others
When you have fights with a friend that is your best friend, you won't want to lose her/him, and s/he won't want to lose you. so one of you will try to make up while the other forgive.

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