The Most Dangerous Game Quick Write - A villain

From: A Series of Unfortunate Events
Villain: Count OLaf
Original:
He claimed to be the uncle of 3 kids, whose parents passed away and left a large amount of fortunes behind. He wanted the money so he adopted the kids, but he treated them badly. He even killed the people who adopted the kids later on in the story, and tries to marry the oldest daughter. He died in the end of the story without any of the fortunes.

Corrected:
He claimed to be the uncle of 3 kids, whose parents passed away and left a large fortune behind. He wanted the money so he adopted the kids, but he treated them badly. He even killed the people who adopted the kids later on in the story, and tries to marry the oldest daughter. He died in the end of the story without any of the fortunes.
This character interest me because he have many interesting ways that he intend to steal the fortunes. And you will want to keep on reading about what Count OLaf is going to do next and how are the children going to escape.