Sep 30, 2010

Dog Star Quick Write

Original:

I don't really have had a special relationship with an animal, but I have quite a lot of pets before. When you are alone at home, you can talk to you pet, sometimes, they can seem to be understanding what you say to them. 
You can always just having some animals to talk to and they are always a good listener, they won't talk back to you, even though they also can't make suggestions to you, just having it to listen to you heart may be better if you want to solve your problem yourself.
For a pet, you can take it wherever you want it, as long as it is allowed, but you can't just take one of your friends with you.



Corrected:

I haven't really had a special relationship with an animal, but I have had quite a lot of pets before. When you are alone at home, you can talk to your pet sometimes they seem to understand what you say to them. 
When you are feeling sad, you can talk to the pets and they are always a good listener. They won't talk back to you, even though they can't make suggestions to you. But just having it to listen to your heart may be better if you want to solve your problem yourself.
For a pet, you can take it wherever you want it, as long as it is allowed, but you can't just take one of your friends with you. For example, you want to go for a walk at the park at 11 o'clock at night. Not a lot of people is able to go with you or they don't even want to go, but a pet can.

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  1. "When you are feeling sad, you can talk to (need a word here) and they..."

    "I haven't really had a special relationship with an animal, but I have (past participle here to match with "I haven't really had") quite a lot of pets before."

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