1. She has an aura of desolation loss, should we go and comfort her?
2. He have a lot of friends that are astronomer, so he can ask them to help him with this project.
3. That light was stellar in the dark when we got lost bak there.
4. She is luminous even before she became a famous singer.
5. Even through he is a human himself, he is misanthropic.
6. That object we found on the moon is an terrestrial object, I wonder what it is.
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8. She is planning a labyrinthine experiment at the lab, we shouldn't go and distract her.
Corrected:
1. The aura of her desolation loss is quite distracting. Should we go and comfort her?
2. He have a lot of friends that are astronomer, so he can ask them to help him with this project.
3. That light from the light house was stellar when we got lost in the sea.
4. She is luminous with her friends even before she became a famous singer.
5. Even through he is a human himself, he is misanthropic.
6. That object we found on the moon is a terrestrial object, I wonder what it is.
7. She won by default, because there isn't anyone that can compete with her in her age group.
8. She is planning a labyrinthine experiment at the lab. We shouldn't go and distract her.
"aura of desolation loss." You're using the wrong vocabulary word. Desolation is a noun and loss is a noun. you need to have your adjective describing the noun, therefore, desolating loss.
ReplyDelete#3 also makes no sense still. Look up some examples.