Original:
That guy was famous in an instant because he found a really famous work’s replica, the original is still not found. People only had a slight idea what the art work is about since it was from the aboriginal days. The art work is too mystery that it is kind of incredible. No one truly understands the enigma hidden in the art work. Therefore, many inquisitive people are trying to find out more about the art work.
Corrected:
That guy was famous in an instant because he found a replica of a really famous work of art, the original is still not found. People only had a slight idea what the art work is about since it is an aboriginal art. The art work is quite incredible. No one truly understands the enigma hidden in the art work. Therefore, many inquisitive people are trying to find out more about the art work.
"...he found a really famous work's replica" should be a replica of a really famous work of art. (also don't write expressions like "the famous work's replica." The replica doesn't belong to the work)
ReplyDeleteWe usually say it is aboriginal art, we don't say "it was from the aboriginal days."
The art work is too mystery... (use the adjective, not the noun)
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